Hello friends and fellow bloggers, especially those from the Slice of Life Story Challenge hosted by http://twowritingteachers.wordpress.com/. I’ve had a rough few weeks, and this week did not get off to a great start either. I usually try and work on my blog over the weekend and then polish it on Monday. Due to the (what feels like) millions of other things I had to do, I had not started my blog or even read a children’s book to feature this week as of 6 PM on Monday night. I did what I always do when I feel overwhelmed- I called my mom. She told me what I already knew but still needed to hear: let things go. Easier said than done, but lucky for me, I have a weekly blog that is a perfect place to get things out of my system.
So, this week’s children’s book is the beloved Goodnight Moon by Margaret Wise Brown. I do not have a particular passage from the book that inspired me. Instead, the whole book inspired me to write, “Goodnight Stress,” my adult version of Goodnight Moon (which is also a roundabout ode to mothers). Amazingly, I do not have a copy of Goodnight Moon, so I looked online for the text to it. While looking, I ran across this website that had arranged Goodnight Moon like a poem, which I recommend reading: http://poetryforchildren.tripod.com/poetryforchildren/id18.html. I used her arrangement, so it is easier to read.
That’s it for me this week. If you’re having a rough time, I highly recommend writing your own adult Goodnight Moon poem. I felt much better by the end of it. Hope everyone enjoys it and happy writing! ‘
PS- I apologize about the spacing! I couldn’t get it to stop the double spacing and too tired to figure it out….
Goodnight Stress
In a fine farm house
There was a nice woman
Trying to work out
All the anger and frustration
That is always about
And there were maddening guys thinking they’re wise
And paper all around
And deadlines abound
And mistakes being made
And nerves that are frayed
And clients, and a blog, and a mind that feels bogged
And a sweet mom who helps cut through the fog…
Goodnight house
Goodnight worries
Goodnight bad thoughts that tire me out
Goodnight anger and all the doubts
Goodnight guys thinking they’re wise
Goodnight stress and goodnight mess
Goodnight chores and goodnight scores
Goodnight briefs and lack of sleep
Goodnight fights and goodnight slights
Goodnight everyone and goodnight moods
And goodnight to my mom whose love is my truth
Goodnight worries, goodnight cares
Goodnight problems everywhere.
One of my favorite pictures of me and my mom- we are huge Detroit Tiger fans 🙂
Yea for your mom’s wise advice!
What an incredible poem, Jane. I know Goodnight Moon well and you nailed this poem!
Hope things get easier for you soon.
Thanks so much for taking the time to comment Stacey and your kind words- things are always better after writing about them!
What an incredible poem! I am saving this one…and sharing it too! You are so right about the stress of September …. and every year…it seems to grow! Yet, somehow, writing helps us sort out the stressors and put them into some kind of an order!
As I head to bed tonight, I will be saying, “Goodnight stress and goodnight mess, Goodnight chores and goodnight scores, Goodnight briefs and lack of sleep!”
Thanks so much for the kind words! I think I might make reading it a nightly relaxing ritual 🙂
Thanks for the poem… I think I should post this in my bedroom and say goodnight to the stress as well. I hope October slows the pace a bit.
Thanks for the kind words! We should all find a way to say Goodnight Stress- hope your October is a good one as well.
Love the little book, love the grown-up poem, too!
Thanks for the kind words- glad you enjoyed!
A great poem! Seems like moms are the people who carry the stress lots of times. . I so hope your week gets better!
Thanks, Frank! And yes, moms really are miracle-workers. Hope you have a nice week as well.
I love this! And I especially like this line, so true:
And goodnight to my mom whose love is my truth
Thanks for the comment and kind words, Tara. That’s my favorite line as well 🙂
Goodnight stress for sure! Hope your words take those worries far away. Of course when a smoke detector goes off in the n get, there are new worries to crowd the mind. 🙂
Very true, Elsie- nothing like mortal fears to crowd everything else out in a flash! 🙂
You give another example of how turning to a mentor can help provide a container for our thoughts. You worked the words in a remarkable way. I hope you felt lighter after writing.
Ruth
Thanks so much for the kind words, Ruth. I did feel lighter after writing. It was a great reminder of the healing power of writing.
It was so fun to find your Goodnight Stress poem, just as I promised myself to quit reading slices and post some grades! I love your comment about the spacing, sometimes that can be the most trying part of slicing!
It’s good to know that I’m not the only one who has technical difficulties! Thanks so much for the comment and glad you found the poem before grading 🙂
Loved your Good-night poem. I hope today is better. Have a great week, and see you next week.